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Wednesday, November 19, 2014

***A sample of a perfectly done reflection paper***


The Pianist: Man going through a holocaust.

Hanna Kim

 

Racism is a topic we do not often talk about. It’s a topic that is hard to approach and it is definitely not something we usually experience nowadays. So what is this racism exactly? It is discrimination among races. You call this an irony, human being discriminating against other human being, since we are all same humans. But it used to happen a lot in the past. When you look at the world history, you will be able to find many serious events or genocides including racism. Above all, I would like to talk about the holocaust.

You might not be so familiar with a word holocaust, but you would have easily heard of Nazis and Hitler. Holocaust is genocide of Jews, led by Adolf Hitler, who is known as most brutal dictator through all history. It is surely one of the most tragic events that occurred in history. Therefore many films, documents, and novels were made based on holocaust. I would like to talk about one of the films, “The Pianist”. “The Pianist”, as you might have noticed already at the title, is a movie containing a story about Jewish pianist suffering through a holocaust and it is based on a true story. This movie starts with a main character, Wladyslaw Szpilman, playing piano beautifully until a bomb suddenly hits them. With this explosion, runaway of Szpilman starts as well. Like all Jews at that time, he and his family were living in a ghetto, areas they were allowed to live, and had to put this patch proving that he is a Jew. As Nazism gets more worse, he and his family were forced to get on this train that take them to this camp called Auschwitz, which Jews were kept and killed by Nazi soldiers. When they were almost closed to getting on that train, he miraculously gets saved by someone who adored him for his play and he gets separated from his family, All alone, he starts a runaway for his life asking people for help. He faces many moment that almost led him to death during a runaway, but eventually he manage to survive and hides into his remains of what used to be buildings and houses. Suffering from starvation, loneliness, and fears, Szpilman hides in there, hopeless and devastated. He finds this can of food in the wreckage, tries to open it, but it slips and falls and stop in front of someone’s foot. That someone was a German general. They stare each other for a while then general asks him about what he was doing, and his job. Szpilman answers him that he was a pianist and general asks him to play piano. After the play, general, for some reason, doesn’t kill him and even brings him food constantly. Then eventually, Nazists get defeated, and all German soldiers get caught including that general who helped Szpilman. General asks for help, telling he had helped Jew named Szpilman but it gets ignored. Movie ends like the beginning, Szpilman playing piano. I think this movie is very well made, and it is one of the movies that I got strong impression. The music was very suitable, and the act of Adrien Brody was just perfect, showing every detail of emotions and feeling of Szpilman and image or atmosphere of the movie just showed exactly what it would be like at that time. I also liked how it showed little details how Jews got through that times by putting scenes like when they share one caramel into pieces, or how Szpilman hides through a runaway.

The first time that I watched this movie was when I was attending school in U.S. We were learning about holocaust in history class and this holocaust was most horrifying and shocking thing in my whole life. The pictures of piles bodies dumped in holes, films that were shows about Auschwitz, and stories I read from books like Anne’s Diary; all of them described that time Jews were discriminated so clearly that I just could not believe it really happened. I also couldn’t believe how human being can be so cruel to other human being. That was the only thought I had at that time. How cruel! But when I watched it for the second time after few years, I had a chance to think more deeply about racism. Why on earth did Adolf Hitler hate Jews so much? Was it because of, like some people suggest, the financial problems that Germany had to take care of after the war? I just couldn’t understand and neither will anybody. But one thing we can see from the movie, is that not all Nazis were driven to kill all Jews like Hitler; like that German general who took care of Szpilman. This holocaust might have started from this pure racism Adolf Hitler had but I think he had used this power of massive crowd. No one exactly know the reason why they were so better than Jews or why Germans had to hate Jews so much but they hated and discriminated against them anyway because others all do and they were told to. Thus, I suppose some of them might were just following other people out of mob psychology. Nowadays, there aren’t many racisms going on the surface, but it still exists in some places. Because I don’t have a right to force others to think the way I want them to, I can’t change their minds, but if there are people with racism in their minds, I just want to tell them that race can’t be a standard or a criteria to judge people. It is something no one can decide so no one should feel superior or inferior by races.
 
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Monday, November 3, 2014

***Tuesday & Thursday 7, 8 Second Writing Assignment***

Post your main and mini posts here.

***Tuesday & Friday 3, 4 Second Writing Assignment***

Post your main and mini posts here!

***Monday & Wednesday 7, 8 Second Writing Assignment***

Please post your main posts and mini posts here.

***Monday & Wednesday 5, 6 Second Writing Posts***

Second Writing Assignment

 
 
 
 
Second Writing Assignment
For your second writing assignment, you must post one main post and a minimum of four mini posts on the blog for your peers to comment.  It can be about anything related to Units 8-10.  The purpose of writing is to give each student the freedom to express his/her ideas and thoughts in a safer environment, which hopefully will give us the opportunity to learn from each other.
 
The main post should be a paragraph and should contain some of your own thoughts about a subject, which may even include some facts you have researched about the subject.  Your main post should have a position and should seek other’s opinion about your subject.  It is each student’s responsibility to maintain their own main post as other students comment on them.  If you neglect your main post, it will die, so you want to make sure to comment periodically to what other students have commented.
 
The four mini posts should be a response to another student’s post.  Support your ideas with facts and logical reasoning as to why you think the way you do instead of assuming the audience understands.  You may post more than four mini posts. Remember, you don’t necessarily have to have the answers or solutions to the post, but rather, can help to add to the question or help clarify the main post.  Just let your ideas flourish and see where it takes you.
 
Remember to be respectful even if the contents of the post are different from the opinions of our own.
Also, remember to write your name on each comment to receive proper credit.
 
The writing assignment will be graded on the following:
** Completion of all five posts—did the student complete 1 main post and 4 mini posts?
** Content—Were the comments well thought out with reason and logic? Do they add to the post rather than to take away from the main post?
 Good luck!  I’m looking forward to reading all of your responses!